Sentence Composing # 4- Opening Adjective- Practice # 3, # 4, and # 5;

Sentence Composing # 4- Opening Adjective- Practice # 3, # 4, and # 5;

Practice 3: Combining to Imitate

In the model, identify the opening adjectives. Next, combine the list of sentences to imitate the model. Finally, write your own imitation of the model and identify any opening adjectives.

Model: Dark, velvety, the beauty of his mustache was enhanced by his strong clean-shaven chin.
--Toni Morrison, Beloved

a. His cautionary steps were slow.

b. His cautionary steps were weary.

c. His cautionary were caused by something.

d. The cause was the surrounding overexcited horses.

Slow and weary his cautionary steps were caused by the surrounding overexcited horses.
Fast and steadily she made her way to the finish line by passing many contenders.

Practice 4: Imitating

1. Identify the opening adjectives in the models and sample imitations. Then write an imitation of each model sentences, one sentence part at a time. Read one of your imitations to see if your classmates can guess which model you imitated.

Models:

1. Wordless, we split up.
--Annie Dillard, An American Childhood

Sample: Wet, the napkin fell apart
Bored, we walked away.

2. Cold, dark, and windowless, it stretched the length of the house.
--Jessamyn West, "The Child's Day"

Sample: Hot, humid, and muggy, the weather exhausted the stamina of the bikers.
Dry, windy and hot, the runners were exhausted running up the hill.

3. Afraid that we might hunt for a cheaper apartment for the next two weeks and find nothing better than this one, we took it

Sample: Happy that we would escape to a lovely beach for the upcoming one month and have nothing but good time, we left home.

Sad that we found out we can't swim or sit in the hot tub, we went back to our room.
Practice 5: Expanding

The opening adjectives are omitted at the caret mark(^) in the following sentences. For each caret, add an opening adjective or adjective phrase, plending your content and style with the rest of the sentence.

1. Frightened, I begain climbing the ladder's rungs, slightly reassured by having Finny right behind me.
--John Knowles, A Seperate Peace

2. Cold and miserable, he wandered about the many tents, only to find that one place as cold as another.
--Jack London, "To Build a Fire"

3. Excited and enthused, my limited reading helped me to know something of a world beyond the four walls of my study.
Christy Brown, My Left Foot